Wednesday 21 March 2018

Trapped in the zoo!

It was the end of a fantastic day visiting London Zoo. On my way to the exit, I saw a brightly coloured bird swoop past me. So I went to investigate. I followed him, running as fast as my feet would carry me, over a wobbly bridge. By now it had grown dark, very dark and there were no people left in the zoo. I was completely on my own! Then, I began to hear some strange noises ...


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27 comments:

  1. I walked and I found a phone so I caled my dad but they were sleeping. So I were looking in my pocket do I have "Oh here it is" "Lets found a exit" "I'v got a long way" Lets go here is the exit but the gate is locked "I have to sleep here and exit tomorow "

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  2. Daesha'rel 3 red1:53 pm, March 23, 2018

    I'm trapped in the zoo.I've been put in this rusty cage with dirty bars and nasty foods this not much like home at all.All I see is yellow eyes watching me carefully which is very creepy because it won't blink at all i didn't have a torch or a flash light all I see is darkness.To be contined

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  3. Daesha'rel 3 red1:56 pm, March 23, 2018

    I'm trapped in the zoo.I've been put in this rusty cage with dirty bars and nasty foods this not much like home at all.All I see is yellow beedy eyes watching me carefully which is very creepy because it won't blink at all i didn't have a torch or a flash light all I see is darkness.To be continued...

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  4. There are more then 1000 eyes looking at me. Why am I in a cage? This is creepy. Why am I and where am I? If it has a lock were is the key? It must be lying around here somewhere. It must be at the door or the in this cage or maybe one of the animals has it. But I do not want to look up they mite peck me or eat me. They will do some think to me were is the key how do i escape or mabe a pick lock some were.

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  5. I looked all around me but i saw no one. where is this strange noise coming from? I am so scard I want to go to my house.

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  6. Strange noises gathering around me I heard rattles and scraping,fluttering so I ran

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  7. I had a light and found a map of the zoo. I was not sure were was. I past the sea zone and soon a tiger appeared I ran away as fast as a cheetah. Suddenly I found a phone nouwan answered.I founded the exit it was blocked by. a spleen tiger. I past thou him and I got out of the zoo.

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  8. It was the end of the day at the London Zoo i was finding a way to exit but it seemed like there was no way out.But When i turned around i saw a bird yellow eyes just like a owl.Im not sure if it was a owl or not But it defintely had yellow eyes so i ensure it was a owl.I ran as fast as i can to get to freedom But jumping over the fence is forbidden in one of these Zoos Because There is cameras anywhere soon And one of these animals could escape any moment But i knew that a owl like that would never escape in a zoo just because it is smart.

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  9. I was looking evreeywer for my mum but i kotot find her . SO it was to duck so i dsidid to find a way out sumbodee mit have the key so i wold find how has a key with a exap plan

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  10. I was lost then I remember some thing I had the map I got the map but I could not see I stand by the moon and I was
    so far away from the exit I heard a strange nois I was scared.

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  11. I found a telephone and grabbed it. I dilled a number that was at the reception. I waited,waited and waited... No one answered the phone. At that very moment I started to worry. Then I found a map. I was relieved! I opened it up and stepped into the moonlight. Now,this was the moment I was frightened. I slowly looked at the map suspiciously. From what I could see now was a cage with chicken wire. It said “WARNING, Do not enter”. Exactly the same picture and just about able to see the sign on the map it said...Land of the TIGER's. “Ggggrrrr” growled a strange voice.“I'm having you for my super...
    Then I realised I was far realy far
    away from the exit. What could I do?

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    1. Great start, please continue Zyanna.

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    2. I went inside the small house and as I went through the door it was creaking . When I was inside the house the door slowly closed but it didn’t make a creaking noise. As the door closed I was exploring the house then I looked at the door and it was closed so I tried to push it but it was locked. Then I decided that I should go and look around. Meanwhile I started to hear a strange noise. It sounded like a animal sprinting back and forth.

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  12. After a fantastic day at the zoo I remember that I was all alone I panicked for a second. There was a map Wright on the floor I picked it up and I saw that I was wright at the danger zone the same thing that I saw on the map it was the tigers. I heard a strange noise... something was speaking I’m going to eat you for dinner. I screamed I shouted but there was no hope. I thou found a telephone I wated for hours and hours but no one picked up I thought I was a gonner. And a ran to the monkey sechon but it was followed me in the dark dark booshes the monkeys have gone insane wat made them like that.

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  13. I’m trapped inside a rusty cage it’s creepy animals and nasty food it’s nothing like home and all I can see is an animal staring at me.All I am in is darkness.To be continued...

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  14. I was looking for the exit but I got lost .I axedently went in a door which said Danger,it was very dark and spooky out there.At the moment I am shaking nd my hart is pumping so fastly that I think it will explode.Soon as I heard growling, I stopped and took a deep breath in .The noise was coming from a animal called a lion.It jumped and ran to me, and chased me .I had to run as fast as possible,soon as I saw a rock and a siciraty next to it I had jump as high as I can. To be continued...

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  15. Meanwhile we were walking home then something caught my eye. It was a bird ,but it was a really strange one because it was gliding upside down. I decided to follow it so I ran as fast as I could but then I noticed that it was flying really slowly . I started to feel suspicious because I thought that It would lead me to a place that I wouldn’t know. After I noticed that it was flying even faster so I started to run . Then I started to run out of breath . It was midnight and I was standing in front of a small house. Then I realised that I couldn’t see the bird anymore. It disappeared so I decided to walk in the the dusty old and broken and small house. To be continued ...

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  16. I was just looking at other animals before I left then I heard a little baboon screaming as if it was out out of it’s cage. Then I quickly turned around to see what was going once I turned around I heard the noise from the other side.I began to shiver. Suddenly different noises came from left,right,front and back. I was petified I begain to be worred.I felt as if someone was touching me in all the directions from left,right,front to back.I tried to call my family but there was no answer so I tried to escape but I couldn’t get a way.I then saw a cage that was made out of duck tape.As I locked at the cage the gate opened by it self. Then somebody pushed me in the gate. I was confused how a animal pushed me because nobboody else that was a human was there.Becausethe gate was closed nobody in the world could open it.I was Fritend and terrified at the same time and I from that day never forgot that animals locked me up in the zoo.From that day on I did not like animals also I did not forgive them for what they did. I never wanted to go to the zoo anymore or go next to it I didn’t want to have any faith in animals anymore I just looked at them as regular animals.To be continued...

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  17. When I got to London Zoo in nightime a bird swoop past me.like a eagle So i called someone but they didn’t respond at my phone but I was so scared that a noise said I want to have dinner whith you said a strange voice behind the exit but people were at home and there were no light in the zoo . Then I didn’t have any map to get out of here but the strange voice is still saying the same thing what he said before. To be continued

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  18. I was in the zoo nobody else was I couldn’t see anything because it was midnight. I remembered I had my phone that dad brought me.I dilead my dads phone number he didn’t pick up. I tried calling mums number and I had ran out of credit. I kept walking i heard a noise I said “who’s there”. All i heard was gggggggrrrrrrrr and a roarrrrr. I turned around nothing was there.I kept on walking I turned around again I saw a big tiger I thought I was dreaming. I kept on walking. 5minutes after I turned around then I saw a camel a lion and the same tiger. They were chasing me I ran I ran so fast I ran into a dead end I crashed! I crashed so hard I dropped to the floor I looked behind me I had lost the animals. I was shaking so much it looked like it was going morning I checked the time on my phone and it was 07:00am. I heard my mum shouting
    “were are you harry I had found my family she told me of and said pass your I tried to explain to them but dad said i don’t believe you.

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    1. ... dad said "your grownded for 2 weeks and no sweets for 2 months ones we got home i went straight to my room and went sleep.

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  19. I was scared then l found a phone on the wet floor.I tipped in a phone number. I waited for a little bit no answer.
    I found hav of map on the floor then. I said to my self (I still can’t see anything)so I looked around then l sawd the other
    part of the map then. I putted it to gaver then I started to hee strange nowsis...

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  20. When I was at the zoo It was getting darker and thre was no people there I cannot see then i saw a animal with orange eyes I ran a yay but it keep following me I crash th a lion cage it tried to get out. But it cannot i step on something I feel what it was it was a flashlight I saw it was a owl but it’s still following me. I remember I had a phone I call the number but no one answered the owl loss me but he finally found me beacause he had good eye sight i saw that. I heard animals roaring I saw a trash can fall over I use a flashlight to see what was that I tried to egnore the noise all I could think of is getting out of here I finally found the exit I close the door locked it

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    1. Then they were gone I went inside I saw the animals think I was gone then the owl told the animals I was back in the zoo

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  21. Until I looked or and and I found a phone I called a number I waited for a long time but no one seemed to answer ion the very moment of my eye there was a strange map in the corner of my other eye and then I opened it up I stepped in the butiffal moonlight and now it was the very moment I was relay really really terrerrfid I looked at the map very closely. What I can see now is a tiny tiny little cage with chicken and little wire. It said do not enter”. what the same picture and just about able to see sign to be continued.

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  22. It was the end of the day and it was so dark and everyone was at home sleeping and I was the only one there and while I was going home I saw a strange creature racing past me.I didn

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  23. I found a phone and called for a cabe but now one answered soI ran to a door there was a woman that came out with children so they said you shouldn’t be out at this time because someone might take you away but I didn’t answer so I was running. I came to a house now one was there

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