Monday, 20 March 2017

O happy dagger

Write a news bulletin which announces Juliet's death to the people of Verona.
Think about what details you will need to include. At the tomb, in the churchyard, are three dead bodies: Romeo, Juliet and Paris. How will you report this scene? Will you interview Balthasar, Paris' servant, and what will he say?

Challenge
What do you think will happen to the Montagues and the Capulets?

66 comments:

  1. ROMEO KILLS PARIS,READ ALL ABOUT IT. This is what some one heard, Romeo sees Paris and attacks him. Paris tries to escape Romeo's clutches. But Paris tripped on the path and was stabbed. Paris asked to be placed next to Juliet. When Romeo saw Juliet dead, he bought a vial of poison and drank it all to be with Juliet. Paris was founded hidden deeper in the Capulets tomb, his rotting corpse was still warm.

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    1. Super start Ellie. What about one line to finish this saying how sad it was?

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    2. The rebellious families where devastated to see another series of unfortunate events that had struck without a sign.

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  2. DEATH OF JULIET,ROMEO AND PARIS!
    Romeo once again slay this sword at someone and it was Paris the relative of Prince Escalus! Juliet died of a heart attak of what her nurse said but where still investigting about what happend to her. Romeo killed himself with a poisen we think he bought piosen and drank it without knowing and died and then someone put him near Juliet. We are going to cheak if there are any eyewittnesses. If you know what happend please call 911 (the police )

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    1. Lovely and very informative Melissa!

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  3. Tae'jah4Blue10:55 am, March 23, 2017

    Romeo might of killed Paris. And the montages and the Capulets might be friends

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    1. Read the question Tae'Jah. You are supposed to write a short newspaper article.

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    2. Tae'jah 4blue2:12 pm, June 13, 2017

      Hello reporter Tae'jah, there has been a crime with Romeo and Juliet . Romeo and Paris had a fight to see who would be with Juliet and unfortunately Paris died without meeting his true love. Romeo thought that Juliet died but she did not so he killed himself then Juliet woke up and saw him dead so she killed her self.

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  4. juliet pretends to die because she doesn't want to mary Paris.when paris saw juliet he was so sad that he killed him self, so when paris was dead juliet went to romeo.

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    1. Again read the question Ishmael.

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    2. Two members(Tybalt and Mercutio) of Two well known families have died. One member sacrificed his life for his best friend it was the only thing he could do to protect his best friend, Romeo. People think it's Romeo's fault but he did the right thing and the wrong thing at the same time. Technically he did the right thing because Tybalt killed Mercutio ( Romeo's best friend) so Romeo killed Tybalt.

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  5. Paris kills Juliet! Romeo kills Paris, then himself!

    On March 22 2017, a bystander was buying some pie and then a scream was heard. They said: Paris had been stalking Juliet, following her around as she went around town. Romeo was also in town, but didn't get the chance to see Juliet. With a knife bore in his hand, Paris killed Juliet. Romeo had heard this ear-piercing scream and ran to the scene. He saw the knife in Paris' hand and attacked him. Romeo killed Paris. Romeo felt so bad, he took the knife out of Paris' hand and killed himself. That was the end. To be continued tomorrow.

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    1. Hope you are feeling better Fathia. Well done for blogging when you are ill at home. Start again, but begin with a headline that describes the scene in the tomb for example: Shock horror, three bodies discovered in Capulet tomb.

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    2. Shocked Public! Three Bodies found in Capulet Tomb.

      On June 14 2017, a bystander was gathering some fruits for the Annual Bake-off, when she heard an ear-piercing scream coming from behind the Capulet Home. She rushed to see what was going on. She didn't want to reveal her identity, but she said: "I was watching and I saw a man with a knife in his hand, and blood was dripping from it. There was a teenage girl and a pool of blood surrounded her. He looked insane. Another man came afterwards and he looked angry, but terrified. He grabbed the knife and stuck it into the other man's chest. Then he put it into his head." Police are investigating thoroughly. Call 999 if worried about anything.

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  6. ROMEO KILLS PARIS
    On 18 of March a girl called Juliet had died until the murder of dear Tybalt,ROMEO! Killed Paris and then drank a draft of poison just because he loved Juliet except Juliet wasn't actually dead she just drank a sleeping potion but that montage Romeo actually thought that Juliet was dead but when Juliet woke to be surprised Romeo was dead she tried to drink a tiny drop of poison but it didn't work so she grabbed the dagger from Romeos belt and stabbed her heart to die

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  7. ROMEO KILLS,ON MARCH 20TH 2017
    Once again Romeo kill with just one dagger straight through the heart the red hot blood ran across his body that left a stained ground and it was terrible to see when he sadly dropped to the ground with know goodbye...

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  8. Juliet and Paris killed
    when I was walking to the market to get some bread I heard Juliet and Paris were dead it was so sad Lord capulet was so upset about what happend the people of Verona was shock. now Lord capulet needs to cancel his wedding I could never imagine some one would be so upset. this is so sad Juliet is dead now. I think we need to never try and do a wedding again someone needs to call the police now


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    1. This is a recount instead of a newspaper report. Read the question carefully and try again.

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    2. The death of Romeo, Juliet and Paris
      Romeo has killed someone with a dagger. Romeo can't be trusted. Paris was trying to kill Juliet but he caught up with her and killed her. Luckily Paris was killed by Romeo, but he also killed himself. If you are a witness then call us and your story will be put onto the news. If worried,call 999.

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  9. Melissa + Jamoya12:12 pm, March 30, 2017

    the rotten romance
    romeo paris thaught he was dead when he saw a MONTAGUE next to juloet paris thaught romeo killed him self because he killed juliet he thaught what if lord capulet finds out he has no children. caps he knew it was his fault this arguing over this old thing nowone remembers we will give peace some of there children dont foght

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  10. I think that the Capulets and the Montagues will not fight again because they think that if they fight again they will kill each other and there would no more be Capulets and Montagues and because would all be dead. And their going to be with Mercutio,Tybalt,Romeo,Juliet and Paris.

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    1. Again read the question carefully Guillermo. Start again.

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    2. Guillermo 4 red1:04 pm, June 13, 2017

      Two members of Two different families have died at Verona Square after a terrible incident happened. It has been said that the men were play fighting with swords but others think they were training with there swords. I have no idea what happened but I will keep you with the newest information. Meanwhile, here are some eyewitness quotes. This quote is from Jason Buster "I was walking around Verona Square just when I saw a large building I turned around because I heard panic. All I saw scattering Guinea Pigs like there were hungry for food . That's all I know about the incident." There you have it from Jason Buster.

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  11. Hello people news reporter David here I have just been informed that a terrible incident has happened at Verona Square where one Capulet and one Montague has died. It has been said that this whole incident wouldn't have happened if the Two families weren't in a feud. What happened you may ask well we don't know but I will keep you with the latest updates. While you wait why don't you listen to some eyewitness quotes. This one is from shopkeeper, Jonny Ward "I was selling rotten tomatoes for Shakespeare's play, Hamlet. Then I looked through the window to see if any costumers were coming to my shop but all I saw was people scattering like headless chickens. That's about when I saw Two people sword fighting I didn't know who they were because I didn't have my glasses on. That's all I know about it." and there you have it from Jonny Ward.

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  12. Hello this is Tyler Martin the two lovers have passed out because Romeo thought that Juliet had died but instead he killed himself for his love and Juliet died for Romeo ,the two families saw the death.The families would be arrested for there errors.

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  13. Hello everyone, newsreporter Shilon, Juliet had a love death and it was with Romeo fast Romeo got a poison to kill him self and Juliet got a sleeping potion . Juliet drinks her potion and she falls asleep with flowers in her hand .Romeo see her and he has his poison then he drank it he died with Juliet wakes up and sees that Romeo is dead on the floor Juliet crys and crys until she has the idea of killing herself with h the knife that she had she takes her opportunity to kill herself and she does now they dance with each other in Hevean. The parents unite forces and remember this as there saddest song time of there lives.

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  14. Hello citizens this is Jason reporting at channel 4 and this is verona lets see what happened so far The Montagues and Capulets are two feuding families, whose children meet and fall in love. ... There are obstacles on the way, like Juliet's cousin, Tybalt, and Romeo's friend Mercutio, and many fights and for all of this madness at last the two young fellow romeo and juliet.

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  15. hello citizens of verona newsreporter marius, breaking news a horrifing death has been found juliet capulet has poisoned her self so did romeo montague a eyewitness says juliet was juliet sipped a sleepy potion and romeo was heartbroken he thought juliet died so he poisined him self while while feeling sorry for himself. when juliet woke up in tears seeing romeo deing so she thought if romeo dies i die she killed herself there familes joine forces and they promise to never ever fight again while looking at pictures when they were younger they promised to never to forget them never

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  16. Hello everybody, news reporter Liani, a horrifying crime has just happened. At Verona square where two families are in a feud for years. Each of there families members are sadly dead. People have said that this wouldn't have happened if there wasn't a feud at all. Well tell you as much as we can latest out of it. Listen to what the others think some might be an eye witness and some can just have watched half and just ran away . when I see two people fighting with cords I just be an eyewitness.

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  17. hello every body out there my name is Makayla news rapports here and we are here to descus who killed the 2 family's. killed and they ended up getting killed by just dieting by there self i don't think that the Montague, killed a Capulet, I think they killed there self because if the Capulet's killed the Montague's that means who killed the Capulet's so I think that they all fated or they just to old or they just dropped dead so they could not possibly killed each other.

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  18. Good afternoon everybody. Today Mr. Konrad the reporter and we today we will talk about the death from Juliet Capulet ,and Romeo Montague. So it started of by two families having a fued. For years and years they were fighting each other. The families were Montague and Capulet. They just hated each other very much. These two families were fighting, but two chilldren got in love in secret. It was Romeo and Juliet. That time there was a mask party. Romeo ,secretly, came in to look at his girlfriend. But after years, someone gave her sleeping potion and flowers. Romeo came in, and thought that she died. BUT SHE WASN'T, She was alive but sleeping. Romeo decided to kill himself with Juliet and then, Juliet woke up. Blood driping like a pipe out of Romeo's body. Romeo in Hevean, Waiting for Juliet. So sadly Juliet needed to kill herself to meet Romeo. Two dead bodies lying on the ground, Romeo and Juliet dancing in Hevean. These families. If they fight then they'll have a punishment. They'll die

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  19. Hello everyone, this is news reporter Gabriel, I had been informed that two members from two different families had a terrible incident in Verona Square. Where one Capulet and a Montague had died. It has been said that the men where play fighting with swords but others think that they were training. I have no idea what happened but I will keep you with the newest information. Meanwhile, here are some eyewitness quotes. This quote is from Jake Martin"I was walking around Verona Square until I turned around and I saw men running like Guinea pigs searching for food. That's all I know about the incident." There you have it from Jake Martin.

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  20. Hello every one my name is shakeer we are here in the capulets house in the room were Juliet died there is blood everywhere pouring out of the bodes we have some eye witness here's he father" I don't know what happened to my buttifull daughter it looks like she stabbed her self". I think to be continued

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  21. PARIS KILLS ROMEO!this tribal avaunt started in Verona Paris had herd about Romeo in love with Juliet.one day Paris went up to Romeo and said "you can not still my girl"Romeo just stud there looking but he said"I will fight for my love"so then it hapend then Romeo was killed to be continued

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  22. Hello everyone this is news reporter Shaylah,Juliet drank sleeping potion Romeo thought she was dead so Romeo drank all the potion which killed him.Juliet wakes up when Romeo is dying Juliet starts to cry,she says MY LOVE LIFE IS RUINED , I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING.

    Juliets Father and Mother comes back.
    she gets flowers and puts them in Romeo's hand then puts cloth around the perimeter of him and makes a heart shape.she an sister Lawrence decorated it well then Juliet had the opportunity to kill herself .she stabs herself
    then she is dead.
    when her parents come back they suddenly stop arguing mum started crying dad started to put flowers around the heart shape.

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  23. Hello people it it your favourite reporter, Jada. I am here to tell you some disgusting and horrifying news that happened just a few minutes ago in the main square of Verona. A voilent incident happened between the two warring families. When you here this news your face will freeze in shock. People have said that all of this wouldn't have happened if the two families (Montagues and Capulets) weren't in a long term feud. Now for the detail. This is how I found out. I was sitting in a cafe on the square when I heard people arguing and shouting, then I heard the sword of metal clashing. I must be a fight I thought, so I quickly ran over and saw a terrible scene. There were two swords on the floor and ... there was a body. A dead body, covered in blood. Then I ran as fast as I could. To be continued ...

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  24. Hello this melissa the best reporter you know some terrible news has happened not long ago .This news is going on all over the world already .So this is what happened part of two families have been fighting the only reason how i know. Is because i heard people fighting and shouting so i went over there to see and i saw one man on the floor and two swords . The man who was on the floor had blood coming out of his heart so i told every one i new so this is all i got to tell you by .

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  25. Hello news reporter Hafsa here live on BBC news, sadly two young lovers lost there lives and now are in there grave while Juliet drunk a sleeping posion the next thing she sore was romeo dead so she decidid to kill her self now both of the young children are dead once each child wanted to be with each other there pathetic familys tryed to stop them but it still never worked out so both familys are now are in jail. This was news repoter Hafsa here on BBC news live.

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  26. hello everyone my name is boston a newsrporter will have three dead body name romeo and paris and juliet romeo kill himself with poison juliet dead by stab her self juliet.juliet had a sleeping poiton and she went to sleep romeo saw dead so he decided to kill him self dead but juliet saw romeo dead so pick up the knife kill he self.

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  27. I think the montagious and the cupiluts are going to end the war

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  28. Romeo and Juliet death!

    Sadly it happend a really dadourose accident with Romeo and Juliet they both died.
    It was so sad to people hear about it. It just happened strait away. First Juliet died
    And then Romeo saw Juliet and then he died

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    1. can you give me a little more description

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  29. hello everyone, if you did not know Juliet drank a sleep potion, she thought Romeo was dead so she drank poison. Romeo and Juilet had a great death together. They found Romeo and Juilet bodies in the tomb in Verona's church. They were on top of each other. Romeo did get to see Juilet, but it was not the way he wanted it to be.

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  30. ROMEO KiLL PARES,READ All About IT. This is when Romeo kill pares then romeo was in the church then romeo saw Juliet she was there then Romeo kissed Juliet and then Juliet wact up and romeo grid the poshen

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  31. Kermarley 4 Blue11:46 am, June 15, 2017

    ALERT ALERT romeo paris and Juliet is dead when romeo sneaked in the capelets house with a bag of bag of poisen but paris got in the way and started the the bloody mess began but in the end romeo stabbed him in his belly and that was the end of paris. Romeo rushed to Juliet and there she was dead. Romeo brought out his poisen drank it to die with Juliet and that was the last of them.

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    1. Can you spot where you have used the wrong tense Kermarley?

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  32. hello reporter it is me Taio live on BBC news reporting some sad news that two lovers died and lost their lives now their being berried in a grave Paris,romeo and Juliet one men laying on the floor with a sword in their hand romeo drunk with hole bottle of poison in his mouth. Juliet sucked of left poison on romeos lips.

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  33. challenge: i think the Montague and the Capulet will become friends and they will both visit their children.

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    1. do you mean in their graves.

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  34. Romeo kills paris Guliet kills her self then Romeo kills him self
    news reporter coming in live with a seen tow young children how have lost there lives liying in a churchyard 2 rival familys montague and capulet wont let there children go there own way making there children misridle and un happy. With no friends just sitting at home all alone with nothing to do makes there children not listen to them and go there own way and do what they want so they took matters in to there own hands Guliet went to sister lorance for advice while on the other hand Romeo getting what he is no suppos to get POISEN no one ever new were Romeo was for the time dut when he got dack home sneackt right up to his room morning came Guliet whent to the chapple drunk the the sleeping potion that sister laurance then fell asleep when romeo got there open the cap of the poisen drunk it then died. back to you from the reporter

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  35. Welcome to this BBC news flash. We have been informed that Lord Capulet's beautiful daughter and Lord Montague's oldest son have killed and their bodies are laying in the dark crypt in Verona's church. It was an awful death. The young girl had stabbed herself and there was blood everywhere. Crowds have started to come to the church to see what is going on,. People are crying and weeping. We have found an eyewitness. His name is Balthasar and this is what he said. "The last time I saw Montague he was alive. I had nothing to do with their deaths." This is a shock. Both the Lords and Ladies Capulet and Montage are very sad, so now they have desidid to make peace.

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  36. Welcome It's your wonderful news reporter, Jayanna. On today's news a terrible incident has occurred the streets of Verona. Three citizen have pasted away, we don't know how they died when they died and who killed them.. But luckily we found out their names. there was a lovely couple Romeo and Juliet, actually a married couple. The other person was Paris he was related to our beloved Prince Escalus. We all know that our Prince will be gutted. well we was just informed that Paris's servant just came to the crime scene and he liked to say a few words. " I just came to see Paris, he called me to come and meat him here i said i was going to be a little late, i knew he was a little angry at me but I thought I would come in time..." " But i was late.." This is the end of iron news, call our website if your were at the crime scene or you know those people that have died we will soon know how did this to them..

    I think that the Montague's and the Capulet's will make up for that awful fude between each other and that the murder has done enough to their family's .

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  37. hello at nassim,s news and today two young lovers and Paris have died in the Grave yard of Capulet Juliet drunk the sleeping potion that made her asleep for 24 hours so she does not marry Paris and Romeo would wake her up and be with her for ever but every went wrong romeo got a poison potion he was going drink it so she can go back alive but Paris attack him Romeo killed him so he drunk the potion he died and Juliet woke up she killed her self with a dagger then the two gags of Verona stop all the fitting and that is the end of Nassim's news and see you next time.

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  38. TWO YOUNG LOVERS DEAD WITH A YOUNG PRINCE
    To young lovers are dead and Count Paris has been slayed too. We believe that the young lovers killed themselves. This tragic event happened in the town of Verona. Their bloody bodies were found in the crypt of the church. First the young boy Romeo killed him self because someone else has told him that his wife (Juliet Capulet) was dead. So Romeo went to buy some poison and tragically drank it and died next to Juliet's body. When he arrived at the tomb, he must have fought Paris. Someone passing by said they heard someone shout "you rat catcher, you have slayed my love". We think Juliet stabbed herself with a dagger when she woke up and saw Romeo dead. People have gathered outside the church and are weeping and putting down floweers.

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  39. Hello reporter Tamari. A tragedy has just happened. A man who was banned from his home town his name was Romeo has been found dead. People think he killed Tybalt but did he kill Mercutio? Romeo thought the woman of his dreams died but apparently that woman (Juliet) was just asleep. But here's where the tragedy begins, Juliet actually took sleeping pills which made her sleep for a few days. Then Romeo thought she was gone, so he used a drug to kill himself. Juliet was so devastated when she woke up that she she stabbed herself. Blood was everywhere.

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    1. Excellent Tamari. Now write a title for your bulletin.

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    2. The Love Disaster

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  40. hello everyone this is repporter keneil Romeo and Juliet dead.this was a shocking death juliet killed her self because romeo killed himeself with a pioson potion so juliet killed her self with a sleeping potion this was shocking news everyone was in shock

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  41. previously,
    i think that she had a sleeping posion but i think it was a poison in stead oh no what happened to Romeo he's to young
    die oh no i think i know what he had poison looked Romeos mum found evidences i'm sorry that my son gave juliet poison pills well that's it for today folks the death of romeo and juliet signing off i'm shakeer the news reporter

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  42. news reporter yessica

    Hollow and it is the news reporter yessica today there's has bin a very bad moment for a young girl could Juliet best looks has been killed by Romeo here for is Juliet taking to Romoe.
    I do not now why he Has done that to my friends it is like he dose not like me no more and he will never brake my heart so i will not see him again in my life and I did not even get to say by to him and he was my only love and he blue it away and now I will have to marry some one else and it is Paris.

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  43. Did you hear the news the lovers have been killed its a love disaster the two families should be ashamed for what they done they deserve to die and also the four men have died because of there feud.

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  44. Hello people of Verona this is reporter Nathan.There has been some shocking news around the about Romeo and Juliet it was a tragic ending to there young lives one had to leave because a battle ended into a bloody death one man survived while he avenged the death of his best friend.But here is the devastating part the young man was in Love with a Montague.Also that young man was sent away and if he had ever came back to Verona then they wood of killed him.Let me tell you now how those to young lovers died Romeo went away looking for to be continued.

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  45. Yessica and shaylah 4red10:32 am, June 16, 2017

    News reports yessica and shaylah

    Hello it's shaylah and yessica today's news there has been a bad incident in Trafalgar Square of two deadly members of two different people of the families Montagues and Capulets here is Juliet Capulet talking to Romoe Montage.
    I do not now why he has killed a member of my family and I never even got to say by to him and I thought that you liked me and now I feel like you do not like me any more.

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  46. I do not want him to be my husband I've already got one and it's Romeo.If I was to marry him I'd divorce him straight away! That's it I'm going to divorce him great thinking!

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  47. DEATH OF DESPAIR
    Hello news reporter Abdu her live from Verona. A really tragic event has occurred in the town last night. A prince and and a girl called Juliet Capulet and Romeo Monrague have died. People say that their families have been feuding for generations and generations, other people say if were not feuding for so long none of this would of happened. And other people its because Romeo snuck into the capulet's party that said no montagues allowed. Time for some eyewitness.
    A market trader said 'I was setting up my store of mangos and pineapples when I heard screams coming from the church. I ran to the crypt and saw a boy called Romeo who must have drank something and died then a girl got a dagger and stabbed herself. It is such a tragedy that these young people have died.

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