Saturday, 21 January 2017

Hogarth's horrifying discovery


Hogarth has had a day unlike any other. Can you recount what happened?

16 comments:

  1. A few days ago I went to the sea to do some fishing I felt like some was watchinm

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  2. a few days ago i went fishing in the sea and i saw a big figure walked of a cliff and fell into the sea i knew what to do i went to tell my dad and he said he already knew about him he said the name was iron man

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  3. Quickly after getting his gun he rushed out so the Iron Man crashed into the doors then they felt pale.Because he was
    huge.

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  4. A few days ago i went fishing as usual i heard a enourmus splash i felt scared i was shaking.so i ran all the way home
    i knew i had to tell my farther when i arrived i explained exactly i had seen .fortunately my dad believed me and he said its the Iron Man...

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    1. This is a great start Solomon, but please continue with your recount. What happened after he told his Dad?

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    2. So my dad got a barrelled gun and went out I followed him we got in my dad's car he drives in full speed the enormous Iron Man was in front of us my dad drive down into the Iron Man's leg he was breathing heavily he lifted us up we were in the car he ate the car but luckily me and dad managed to jump out of the eatened car.Me and dad ran home and told mum,mum dropped everything she was cooking my little sister was crying so the next day dad took me to see the aggressive farmers shouting " my vehicles is gone".So they went to the farmers house told him about it he laughed and laughed an "Iron Man you say not true" they went to the next farmers house he believed dad so they set a meeting. In the meeting they set a trap they hid in a box the hole was three trees high we waited and waited until he came he ate the Lorry and fell in so they got their new vehicles that they buyed again put dirt and buried him.The next day they check if he's still there but he was gone forever....

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  5. a couple of days ago some thing horrifyng happened when i was out for my early fishing session. out of the corner of my eye i saw a tall black man on the top of the cliff.i know he is going to change my life he stepped of the cliff. i saw him reappear in the sea i knew i had to tell my dad but my dad already knew what was going on.my mum dropped what she was doing because she was shocked about what she was told.my sister started crying my dad knew what to do he got his gun out.

    the next day my dad told me to get in the car and told my mum to keep my sister safe and herself.then my dad got in the car with me and we drove to the next farm that farmer laughed out loud then we drove to the next farmer that farmer believed us then the iron man came my dad charged into his leg and done he was gone

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  6. Daniesha mcintosh2:42 pm, January 20, 2017

    A few months ago I was out fishing.Nothing unushwell happened untill i saw a metal foot came out of no were it was as big as a bed.It started of the cliff i rushed home and tolied my dad but he allwready new about it was...The iron man.So my dad jummped into his car and drove off. when we got there my dad had to stop the car and then he saw a metal foot come out of the light and then my dad drov to the farmar and said there is an iron man but the farmar didnt belive my dad so he shuved us out the door and he cloused the door and my dad said lets go to the other farmar so we nocked his door and tolied him there was an iron man.THE FARMAR SAID I BELIVE YOU THEN WE WENT BACK to go to the first one we went to and he thght it over and said i belive now.We went to go and get my dads gun and then we saw the iron man my dad comanded to get in the car and then he got in and ran over the iron mans foot.Then the babby started to cry and my mother was shocked and i was happy the the iron man was gone.

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    1. I really enjoyed reading your Iron Man story Daneisha. I was wondering though, how did the Dad in your story already know about the Iron Man?

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  7. Last Sunday morning I going to do my early morning fishing session. I saw a strang black figure taking a great big step of the cliff.It,s legs were as big as a bed,the head was shaped like a dust bin and It was as tall as three on top of each other.He was shocked.

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  8. Last Sunday at my fishing class I felt I was being watched by someone or something so I looked around and saw a black dusty figure.Suddenly it steped off the cliff! A raw seconds later I saw it reappear.At the end of the shore I knew I had to tell my dad so I ran home gasping for breath. I expected what I had seen.This figure head was shaped like a dust bin, as tall as a block of flats my dad told me it was... THE IRON MAN
    Afterward we went to the nearest gamers house he laft us out after we drove to the next farmers house A half eaten tractor. They got home safely.

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  9. Last Friday morning I was getting out of bed when I saw a black figure outside my window I rushed downstairs ,put my jacket on and went outside
    to take a closer look. I couldn't take my eyes off it .It stepped off the cliff !WHen it reappeared I knew my life was about to change .It's feet were
    bigger than a rock ,It's head was bigger than a stack off bricks and his body was bigger than a tractor . I had to tell my father so I rushed back
    home my father or ready knew about the Iron man !So my father Quickly drove to one of the farmer's house we explained but the farmer would
    not believe my father drove me and my family to the second home .This time he really believe it. when we were walking to get my father gun
    We saw a half eaten tractor out of no where. I was confused because I don't know would do that.

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  10. Last week when I was about to go home my life changed forever.
    I saw a tall black man he was as big as a home and his head was round as a dustbin his feet was as big as a single tree.I saw him droffed of a cliff.l ran home fright.l ran to my dad and told him but he knew about the... Iron man.He Quickly got his gun and ran outside. I was confused and got outside to see if he was going to tell the army.He didn't.

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  11. When a boy named Hogarth went home every thing was never the same again he saw something that would change his life forever it was the
    the iron man then he trapped the iron man then he was released.Then just when nothing could get any worse a firey star appeared out of no were and there was breaking news saying if the star hits the Earth it would be like a lorry hitting a gold fish bowl.Next out of the star was a space dragon it landed on Astrailea.Then Hogarth begged for the iron man to help luckily he said yes.But to get there he needs his parts taken off and put on sepret planes because he is to big and heavy to carry on 1 plane.When he got there shouted for a challenge he said that they need to stay on fire the longest.The space dragon hated fire so he could not stay on the fire for long but the iron man was pure iron so he could stay on forever if he wanted to. So the iron man won and everyone selebrated the end

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  12. What happened was a boy called Hogarth went fishing until he heard giant footsteps near by.then the iron creature came outi of the woods. Hogarth took one look at the iron creature and ran for his life.later that week Hogarth came up with a plan to trap the iron man.the trap went well but the iron man got free from the trap.then one day there was a star that was getting closer to earth.later that day there was a Black figure in the sky .hogarth called the iron man for help the iron man said "I'll be there in a FLASH".The iron man came and challenged the creature to a battle of streanth. The iron man won and saved the day once and for all.so Hogarth had a friend in need.
    THE. END.

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