Their teacher beckoned them closer, and as one they edged cautiously towards the skeleton. What was supposed to be a boring school trip had just got a whole lot more exciting! Were they on the verge of making a terrific discovery?
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I think this skeleton is in ancient time maybe it is a raptor or a T-rex the school kids thought it was a boring school trip but when they saw the raptor or the T-rex body they where really interested to know how the dinosaurs body got there when it was supposed to be there in the ancient times maybe it was there in the ancient times and it was a dinosaur, it was a forest.maybe there was explorers there in the ancient times.maybe the dinosaur got haunted by hunters or other dinosaurs like the Spinosaurus or the tyrannosaurus.
ReplyDeleteIt got a little bit colder . As it got colder the skeleton started to move a little they didn't know what to do they were terrified ,shocked and scared. Just after that they left they didn't want to be close to an alive skeleton they didn't even know that could possibly be true. So they left to a cave and they spotted some really shiny glimmering diamonds they were so shiny you could see your reflection it was like a mirror.so they grabbed them ,I mean they children thought this would be a boring trip but after all there enjoying every single piece they've found an alive skeleton and some very shiny , glimmering diamonds obviously your going to enjoy that.
ReplyDeleteThe skeleton was wrap up the children got excited about seeing a skeleton but it was still cold outside children did want to going on the bus but drive went outside but they didn't find him suddenly bus start to move the children shouted the bus is moving the children ran for the bus but the bus was too fast
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They wondered around it and stared at it like it was pure emerald diamond until the teacher broke the silence what are we waiting for off to the museum ordered the teacher no this could be a once in a life time discovery and this could cost a fortune beckoned tam the children scanned the area then trundled towards it like monks serving a preist this was no ordinary dinosaur it was a mixed breed it was a colossal narwhal mixed shark with bones like steel and teeth more terrifying than trex s charging at there school ede shivered forward in his double sock double layered jacket and smoothly touched the bone... SUDDENLY it fell like ash and was indeed this unusual creature was layered with pure emerald tam was so excited he fainted and fell hard WOW cried jay however a man strolled by oh no jamie is going to be in deep deep trouble.whos jamie the kids wondered my son were from the fruture this is 100 thousand years old and suddenly a portal swallowed them up...
ReplyDeleteThey took small steps towards the huge skeleton. They were terrified but also What was it supposed to be? A dinosaur skeleton? Or was it supposed to be some massive creature? Nobody knew a thing about it. Gingerly, they went closer and closer with curiosity. They all desperately wanted to know what the thing was. They all searched for clues even the teacher did. As they edged closer, they saw some fish remains. This was a massive clue to their discovery. It had to be an underwater animal! It could have been a mammal, a fish or reptile! It just had to be! To be continued.
ReplyDeleteA child (called Charlie) was identifying the skeleton body, scientifically.
ReplyDeleteKid 1: "Charlie? Do you know what is this?" he questioned
Charlie took out his microscope and moved around the object. When he found out a substance, he looked at it and used his phone to check it out (even though he was 11 years old, he loved science and adventures).
Charlie: "Hmm... What is this?" he muttered to himself "Let me check it out on my phone with an application called, Substance Scanner v2.1"
Everyone gasped, not knowing what Charlie found out
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Tom looked out the foggy windows.This weather is horrific he thought...When will we ever get lovely weather when you sit on grass and have fun.Zoe looked at him she know's what everyone thinks of,in class the teacher uses her we learn she see's if anyone thinks bad things about her.
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ReplyDeleteWe came closer when suddenly the Skeleton moved... That day I discovered an amazing friendly creature it was a dinosaur I was startled.What was going to happen.That they I found out that surprises could happen any day at any time.When we turned back around to go back to school we heard a as strange voice coming from the skeleton.... To be continued.
Mr.Leroy? ''Where are we''? demanded Danny. I...I don't know kids but get in side the ... where on earth did the bus go?'' while Mr.Leroy was puzzled.So the kids kept on walking until ''Stop!'' all the children just stop like they seen a mega fossil well they kinda did. ''ARE WE ON DINO FOSSILS''! Leo roared like he had a mega microphone well he did. But they were not they were on a super top high technology base.Owned by Robert Brown Jr. Leroy's big brother. To Be Continued
ReplyDeleteAs they was on a verge of finding a discovery of there own the must of felt proud but the thing is they didn't know what it was they gave the there brain a hard peace of thought. It must of been very hard to find out what it was because it was there discovery it was deeply ugly and horrifying they thought to them selfs should they go running telling every body they found a new ugly discovery. They would tell there friends but not like they ever had any half the class at school would not even talk to them because they was a geek all they had was each other but that wasn't cool enough just because they were brothers. The two brothers cept on arguing because of who found the ugly thing first, they wanted to go around to school and make new friends with that new discovery if they get to find out who found the discovery and rub it in the peoples face that has been bullying them for the past few years and they could not take it any more. This was there chance to show every body that they are not losers they are winners the don't quit they are winner and they wanted to show the whole school that they are one of the cool kids. they should not be picked on they are one of them and he wanted them to know as well... TO BE CONTINUED
ReplyDeleteAstonished, the children stepped forward...closer...closer... and closer...UNTIL!They were touching the newly discovered masterpiece, the teachers were horrified. Georgie Cooper was shocked, it was his dream to discover something, in fact anything, he was just a little explorer. Gina,Georgie's twin sister, her jaw had already hit her school shoes, the next minute you know she'll have her jaw drilling through the ground. There were the little 9 year old's stood there full of agitation, all except Lisa Hawkins, Lisa was like the star of whole... not class, not year...But the whole SCHOOL! The reason this was: Lisa was rich she had everything she wanted because her dad owned a museum. By this time of the story you'd think that someone would talk, but... NO! Somehow these humans were speechless...To be continued...
ReplyDeleteIt was no telling what would happen but all I knew was trouble...
ReplyDeleteIt all started 8 hours ago when I was still in bed, (when my mom woke me up AGGGHHHHH...) and I dressed up got to the front door then SSSLLLLAAAAAAAAMMMM!!!!!!!! I went to school.
Remember the boy who was very close to the skeleton?,yeah that was my friend Derek he's a very humorous guy who liked to play so we became friends BUT!!! be prepared because before i tell you this story(of how me and Derek became friends)i need to tell you this story...
when i first saw to my school it was like the middle ages all those stone bricks,high towers,royal flags everything i thought it was haunted because it turns out that there was some kind of mean green knight that was preserved into a evil sword he once owned by him but since then neither the green knight or the evil sword was found but i know it is somewhere here just hidden waiting, WAITING FOR A MOMENT TO STRIKE!
Any ways, when i saw Derek he was suprisingly very she
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The children thought it was going to be boring until they saw a terrific discovery! it was a big skeleton as they got closer and closer they couldn't believe there eyes.They went closer to touch the massive skeleton they thought to them self "we could become millionaires with amazing discovery,the teacher stood like a statue gazing upon the skeleton.Then the children had a great idea to call the museum at first they didn't believe the children but they convinced the museum to come. when they came they thought there eyes was deceiving them,they brought in the museum they asked for the children's names James,Nathan,Eve,Lisa.James was expecting money for his GREAT GREAT! discovery but all they got was a thank you, the children were all angry.To be continued
ReplyDeleteThis is big for a skeleton this monster was alive one tame I CAN not believe this skeleton has the most biggest bones I have ever seen is this real I think this is a sea creatre in the life TO BE CONTINAD...
ReplyDeleteThe school kids where all very scared they have never seen something like this.One of the little children run to her best friend and whispered to break the silence "what are we going to do call the police what tell me?" the girls friend just stared. then the girl screeched trying to get people to notice her "ANSWER ME!" all the children turned and stared at her she instantly looked at her shoes. Finally her friend spoke "I don't know Jessie but I do know we will still be friends no matter what," now almost all the kids where hiding. But their teacher reassured them that they would be ok and that he would try and do something about this. After she talked to the staff they have desired... To be continued...
ReplyDeleteThe skeleton was hideous but cool in the children's eyes, the teacher was breathing very hard they could hear her heart beat it looked like her heart was going to jump. The oldest out of those kids was calming her down. The teacher miss Harriet grabbed the little girls hand and dragged her far away not realizing that she left the two youngest ones. They didn't have a clue that they were gone until the skeleton picked his finger up and dropped it back down, the four eyes opened wide and ran as fast as they could away from it, and then they wondered where is their sister, the younger one screamed out loud and started to shed tears they quietly ran so the creature didn't hear them. TO BE CONTINUED
ReplyDeleteBut they ran faster and there it was the creature stood exactly 20CM infront of them they were so shook that they didn’t blink one bit and have the guts to to move. Suddenly Leo the youngest dropped and fainted and Tara couldn’t pick him up and the skeleton was coming closer and closer, but in a second another creature came out looking a bit better than the other jumped out Tara then turned around and saw it , the thing came but shockingly it was good. TO BE CONTINUED
DeleteTHE teacher let them go near it everyone was murmuring 'WHAT IS IT?' a student shouted students were getting closer one person crawled into its mouth and he couldn't get out every single student grabbed him and threw him out of the mouth people taking pictures the kid who was in the mouth he went back into the bus and shuddered continuously his eye went pure red he was laughing like he was possessed every one got back on to the bus his eyes went back to normal they continued the journey. TO BE CONTINUED
ReplyDelete‘Hello I’m from ITV Channel 123 and I’m here to report about the interruption incident that happend to this poor man who just wants to be left alone,so Mr what happend to you’ He replied shocked ‘Well,I saw something when I woke up in the morning I went outside to spot how dry my washing was instead when I went outside there was my sheets on the floor I saw pieces of small size of lily pads on the ground and my white sheets ruined rapidly I was wondering if it was the wind but I guessed it was frogs because they’re was lots of pieces of lily pads on the floor to guess it but anyways I was really silly to think it was a flood I knew it wasn’t because I had my window open in the middle of the night I only went down for a midnight snack and all I had was a sandwich and milk and I forgot to close my window so I’m really sure there was no tough moments happening in the night.I wasn’t comfortable with all these frogs looking at me in the middle of the night it was like so awkward but it I said still shocking how much frogs I saw it was havoc I thought they were flowers and I thought again maybe they were grass or pomegranates growing but it was just some bunch of grouped up frogs together.I couldn’t believe how much thoughts I took I even pinched myself to see if I was dreaming there was no sign of any frogs anywhere or any other creatures that jump higher than a frog I think I will move houses I can’t believe what I saw
ReplyDeleteHello I’m from cbbc news breakfast club and what did you hear last night mr Alex.‘Last night I heard a frog noise and lily pads on the road and police siren and the ambulance I heard lily pads dropping from the sky I saw Cars stopping in the when they were gonna run over the lily pads. I saw my sheets on the floor I saw my clothes on my floor I saw frogs gliding through my kitchen window I thought it was green goo.I saw lily pads in my house I fainted when there was lily pads in my house.
ReplyDeletethere were about to discover the best thing in there life as they went out of boat to see what was there there were surprised to what they have seen it was huge they have never see this in there life we was terrifed what was there it was a huge moster as we run to boat while moster was there we tried to not wake him up
ReplyDeleteAs the school kid got closer and closer the more terrifying it was Rachel and her partner Emily were even baffled as they were at the back so everything to them was just a blare they could see the people in front of them were in torture it was a long busy day the teacher Mrs love and her partner Mr love have told the kids that they could run around the weird dog an have a picture int there head so if they go to school they at least have something to write about TO BE CONTINUE...
ReplyDeleteAs angel,crystal and sapphire walked on in discover they saw something they've never seen before.It was so beautiful that their was no words to describe.there was thousands of diamonds,crystal,rubys shimmering above. While they were so inrigued in how beautiful it was soon later.
ReplyDeletethe fog was clearing up they did not know what to do they started to see big bones layed across the dusty road they had a fealling they were dinosaur bones but they knew dinosaurs were extinct a long period of time so they started to freake out to be continued
ReplyDeleteRachel and her posies were laughing at Destiny and Ginger Rachel is a bully to everyone and gets in trouble every day, the teachers thought that it would be a great idea to make her go one the trip to makes her be more nice... in a way. Mr and Mrs Love were the best teacher year 5 has ever had and will always love. The kids at the school, Caroline elementary, have never spent days or weeks from home, for school. Jeroldeen brought 5 suit cases and three hand bags. She lives Hampshire in a very rich part of London, but has to come school here to learn to be poor. Mrs Love told the children ''We..we have to s..s..s.set u..u.u..up cam..mm.cam..p he..ere..here'' she said shivering like a cold dog in the cold cold wet rain. Jeroldeen got all of her suit cases out of the bus and asked her ''friend'' Rachel. Rachel is only her friend cause she wasn't the money. TO BE CONTINUED
ReplyDeleteThey were cold and freezing they didn't know were to go because the bone was so huge.There children put the coat and glove together but it was still cold the poor children couldn't move there were still cold.They sat down and closed there coat more tightly so they could get warmer.
ReplyDeleteThey were very cold and freezing with astonishment as how big the bone was very huge.the children was so cold they could not move one inch they all fell to the floor one by one and tried to make them self warmer after nearly an hour to get more warmer,then they went and see all around it then out of know where they sore a gold light then they slowly stepped to it then ROERRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletejust when i saw a dodo bird siting in the tree and i remember back at school miss told me about so i caught it and snug it in my bag until home and kept it in a cage and you couldn't imagine how rich i was i am going to a fortune i thought they will call me sir Ben from this day on as soon as i checked in for the national history museum they couldn't believe it when i said i had a dodo they soon asked for my number and address and gave me the money as soon as possible i never held a check before i said to my self so i took it strait to my mother she was surprised. next morning on the way to school my picture was everywhere Ben the explorer dodo finder just as i expected i was famous.
ReplyDeleteTheir teacher beckoned them closer, and as one they edged cautiously towards the skeleton. What was supposed to be a boring school trip had just got a whole lot more exciting! Were they on the verge of making a life changing discovery? As the children walked on they saw the bones start to move and shake TO BE CONTINUED...
ReplyDeleteThe children disembarked the bus, and stood huddled together on the road. It was a cold, foggy day, and so the children, wrapped up in coats and scarves, shivered as they waited.
ReplyDeleteTheir teacher beckoned them closer, and as one they edged cautiously towards the skeleton. What was supposed to be a boring school trip had just got a whole lot more exciting! Were they on the verge of making a terrific discovery?
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As some of the children when forwards towards the large skeleton and touched it they screamed and ran behind the teacher in fear..... To be continued......
As Karnation,Leoniadas and j'aaliyah were strolling down until they saw something so unbelievable they thought it was so fascinating but at the same time they were scared .....
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