I think the old lady will be angry and annoyed because Hansel and Gretel is eating up her house and if they eat it all up the old lady would not have some where to live.
I think the witch is feeling very disturbed and happy,first of all because children can eat sometimes immature and second of all because the witch will know the way by tricking Hansel and Gretel only if the witch invites the children in her candy house, anyways the stepmother if she knew she would be happy that the witch is tricking Hansel an Gretel.
What are those children doing why are they eating my house I never won't end one to come to my house beacause my house is made out of food people always eat my house I don't won't to freeze to death or I will die these children are hungry and tired I better make food for them or they die I will let them eat in my house these naughty children know it a house for someone all they did is eat my house whith out knowing it for me the children are in so much trouble
Go away you little children what are they doing here I don't like little children and stop eating my house that girl is eating my sugar windows and that boy is eating my roof I hate those kids now the wind is going to blow into my house and I will be freezing and when all of my house is gone it is going to look ugly.
What are those children doing eating my house were in the world did they come from. I hate eny body that try's to eat my house wuns even eating my window these children are a menis I'm going to freeze these children must be stuffed I need to eat them in a huge pan so I can eat them I'm so happy to eat those annoying children I need to get them cooked just right so it will be a dilishous meal for me then il be the wun that is stuffed.
Who are those little stinky brats and why are they eating my house!it is not there house they did not have permission to eat my house how dare they just come to eat it all in one day.You could stay here for the rest of your life and you can get anything you want and need I don't care how much you eat.Im going to leave you alone.Iv'e got a spare mattresses for you to sleep on help your self to what ever you want.Ha ha ha I'm going to make you get so fat that you could not even sit on a chair properly.Im going to make you get so scared sick that you can't eat anymore not even chocolate I'm going to make you so so full that you can't even eat a little tinchy bit of food.good night fat stinky brats.
I think she is feeling exited because she never had visitors before and in her own time she was thinking of a plan because she was really hungry so her plan was she would lock hansel up in a little room and leave him there and she would feed him so much and after every meal she would feel his finger and see how fat he is and when he was so fat she will cook him and gretel would have to clean the whole house and she would not be fed and when hansel was fat she would start a fire so hansel can be coocked and when hansel is done the lady will lock gretel in the tiny room and when someone comes the lady would give gretel lots of food until she was fat unuff so the new person could start a fire to eat gretel and then the next person and it will carry on and the lady will not stave any more and when she is full she will relax all day and when someone else comes they will do her washing up and cleaning the whole house.
She might be thinking of what's next to he house. I think she might be confused because she might think there's a wolf or a owl on top of her house.i think that she might be thinking kids are lost and hungry they saw the house and she might be starting to think they decided to eat the The house.They might get full up and sit down on the ground.The wild animals might come to eat them in the gloomy woods.I know that the old Lady in the house and saw them eating some of her house.I know that she let them in her house.
I think she was thinking about telling them that they can go inside the house and let them eat the cake and then when they get fatter than they will go in a sper house then the woman will sai that they are going to get bernd in fier then she will it them and they will be terrified then the stepmother will be looking for them and she will be looking for them and they will not be there because she left them in the forest they might not see them again and she will never see them again in there life the dad should be terrified becuase you left them
I think she is going to let the kids eat how mouch they want and they can live in her house for ever but then after she is going to eat the children up the children will be eaten because the old woman will eat them and they will never be alive and the old woman will finely get rid of the kids and the mom will be very Happy that her children was finely rid for ever and the mom doesn't have to be inoyd
She would think these children would be in my pot today with there meat turning into a Chicken leg hopping around like a bunch of rabbits they must be got rid of now before I cook them on my pot or make them be my slave
Hello little children come in side and you will be very safe and warm eat as much as you like how left you alone and scared of the animals don't worry I will brteckt you you will be safe
You poor children come in side do you need some blankets becaues I have blankets and you who would leave poor children in the forests eat when your hungry becaues l don't care because l can find another ginger bread house
I think the old lady would thinking what if I eat the children so if she was wicked she would be thinking eat up little children in till your nice and full so I could have more meat when I eat you up for my tummy. Or if she was a kind lady she would say come inside children it's freezing cold out here who would leave some nice here you poor children you can eat as much as you like.
eat as much as can because your starving and you had no food did you eat any food at home but if you didn't that's okay so you can eat everything I don't care if you finish my house.
Hay. Why have eton a peas of my house.coming chidron how left you here on your om. Come on hure up I won't to eat you up for tea so so eat up I won't my tea now so
I see little children nibbling my gingerbread house now lets tell them to come come in my gingerbread house and let them eat but not now when they get closer.right lets tel them now come come in my gingerbread house and have some tea and food.wahaha you are trapped now you will never get out. Now tell me where are you going to now.If you don't tell me I will eat you for dinner and breakfast unless you tell me where you are going right now in this minute and then I will let you leave tomorrow but tomorrow morning you have to eat my gingerbread food as soon as I give you ok ok?
Come in who leave you in the forest you will eat how many you won't you are looking so cold here you will be warme and lonely don't worry here will be safe and you will be very happy
If the old lady is kind she would say eat as much as you want but try not to eat all of the house because it's going to disappear. And if the old lady was a wicked she would say come on and eat some more food so I could eat all of them and then you will die he he he.
If she was kind she will say yes eat and when you are full don't eat more and come in and I got to many place for you to sleep this night wait not this night every night like today or tomorrow I don't care if you want to and watch movies with me and my friends wait I don't have friends but you two can be my best friends because now I know you I just want to say who left you in this forest all alone you must be so hungry because I just saw you eating my roof and my windows and everything in my house.Nobody came here before to meet me.
I think she is thinking look at these wonderful children eat as much as u can so when you get fat i will eat you. It will be like eating the Fates pig in the world or she might be thinking. Well look at these starving little children eating my food eat as much as you can when you get full up tell me and you can come inside and have juice or hot chocolate which one do you prefer and i got 2 warm beds set up for you and you do know you are the first ones to visit me how nice of you.
why did you ubandon us you evl lookin wich arfter you fubidn us its time to fubidon you wikid nortee meen rubish wooman that kils kids that as niser than you and liks to et youup
who are these children what the eating my roof now it is going to rain and ICE with rain oh my god you are killing my life just stop eating my HOUSE I NEED to fresh my self down why are you eating my house
What are the's children doing they are eating my house why are they eating it it's for me i will make hansel fat for me to eat the children look hungry and tired they need to have food and sleep i will make a bed for them to have a rest who put this children into the woods i need to teach them a lesson not to eat my house how dare them eat my house i will punish them for eating my house
do you wont some of my sweets or do you wont to get ckooct into the uvon and become as my tasty soop anser me now i ges that was a no then get some of my candy and sweets to eat do you whant to go into my bedroom then you geys could sleep in my bed.
she might be thinking the children is eating my food whith there ugly hands how rood but they can still eat it and they can come in then i will put them in my pot so they can die for ever so they cant see there bad there thery nise to me and my gingerbread house how wonderful i will be evil for ever they cant eat it all its mean.
I think he's evil because she's a which.I think she's thinking of making them do lots of jobs for her and then she want's to make them die in the forest again and when they died she wants to cook the dead bodies.If she was a kind woman she will make Hansel and Gretel eat the hole house.
Look at these little children I will eat you owl up I can eat you for lunch diner and in the forest or put them in the pot and kook them then see if dad and mum come and save you never ever I will kill you now if you stop eating and stab you.
Oh look at the poor children eating my house they must be starving i don`t know how they managed to get into the forest.Oh dear little children would you like to go inside because you look so freezing and hungry you can eat what you want but not to much because i do not want you to get fat and i don`t think you want to get fat anyway do not desturb me your bed time is at 8.30 and do not eat to much eat something healthy good night.
Why are these children eating my house do they even have a house?I hope they do have a house because i don't want to bring them into my house.But if I bring them into my house I could cook them together achaly I could use one as a slave and I could eat the other one.
if she was kind she would say come in litle children have a drink you must be hungry who left you in the forest all by your self you are just litle children you can,t be left alown but you will be safe and sound with me in my cotedj jinjir bread house
Why are these children eating my house do they even have a house?I hope they do have a house because i don't want to bring them into my house.But if I bring them into my house I could cook them together achaly I could use one as a slave and I could eat the other one.
Oh look some children eting my house I think we can cook them for my diner and if we have a noth for tmurl we can have them for life. Just maybe only the bons of the children. I am so excited to be eating some more little people from the forest wondering around my house.but am so lucky that I can eat as much as I like because I have lost of my speshel food.
The old woman is probably thinking 'Who are these children?what?is my house tasty?if so, i will persuade them to come and eat some more sweets and make one my pet! He,He,Ha'
Who is eating down my house let me go and check?children luckily i have planed out what to do with children when they come my plan is to lock up the bigger one in a cage and the other one i will make her be my slave and she will cook food for him to fatten him up then i will put him in a pot and then she will cook him so i can eat him. exuse me can we come in we are really freezing and we are really hungry. of corse you can come in ive got plenty of food.
I think the old lady will be angry and annoyed because Hansel and Gretel is eating up her house and if they eat it all up the old lady would not have some where to live.
ReplyDeleteI think the witch is feeling very disturbed and happy,first of all because children can eat sometimes immature and second of all because the witch will know the way by tricking Hansel and Gretel only if the witch invites the children in her candy house, anyways the stepmother if she knew she would be happy that the witch is tricking Hansel an Gretel.
ReplyDeleteTry to write in role next time Elizabeth and thank you and Yogitha for commenting on this Year 3 post.
DeleteWhat are those children doing why are they eating my house I never won't end one to come to my house beacause my house is made out of food people always eat my house I don't won't to freeze to death or I will die these children are hungry and tired I better make food for them or they die I will let them eat in my house these naughty children know it a house for someone all they did is eat my house whith out knowing it for me the children are in so much trouble
ReplyDeleteGo away you little children what are they doing here I don't like little children and stop eating my house that girl is eating my sugar windows and that boy is eating my roof I hate those kids now the wind is going to blow into my house and I will be freezing and when all of my house is gone it is going to look ugly.
ReplyDeleteWhat are those children doing eating my house were in the world did they come from. I hate eny body that try's to eat my house wuns even eating my window these children are a menis I'm going to freeze these children must be stuffed I need to eat them in a huge pan so I can eat them I'm so happy to eat those annoying children I need to get them cooked just right so it will be a dilishous meal for me then il be the wun that is stuffed.
ReplyDeleteWho are those little stinky brats and why are they eating my house!it is not there house they did not have permission to eat my house how dare they just come to eat it all in one day.You could stay here for the rest of your life and you can get anything you want and need I don't care how much you eat.Im going to leave you alone.Iv'e got a spare mattresses for you to sleep on help your self to what ever you want.Ha ha ha I'm going to make you get so fat that you could not even sit on a chair properly.Im going to make you get so scared sick that you can't eat anymore not even chocolate I'm going to make you so so full that you can't even eat a little tinchy bit of food.good night fat stinky brats.
ReplyDeleteI think she is feeling exited because she never had visitors before and in her own time she was thinking of a plan because she was really hungry so her plan was she would lock hansel up in a little room and leave him there and she would feed him so much and after every meal she would feel his finger and see how fat he is and when he was so fat she will cook him and gretel would have to clean the whole house and she would not be fed and when hansel was fat she would start a fire so hansel can be coocked and when hansel is done the lady will lock gretel in the tiny room and when someone comes the lady would give gretel lots of food until she was fat unuff so the new person could start a fire to eat gretel and then the next person and it will carry on and the lady will not stave any more and when she is full she will relax all day and when someone else comes they will do her washing up and cleaning the whole house.
ReplyDeleteI think you have heard or read this story before! Well done Tanisha, but try and use full stops next time.
DeleteShe has a mol on her face
ReplyDeleteBut what is she thinking David?
DeleteThey are hungry.
DeleteShe might be thinking of what's next to he house. I think she might be confused because she might think there's a wolf or a owl on top of her house.i think that she might be thinking kids are lost and hungry they saw the house and she might be starting to think they decided to eat the
ReplyDeleteThe house.They might get full up and sit down on the ground.The wild animals might come to eat them in the gloomy woods.I know that the old
Lady in the house and saw them eating some of her house.I know that she let them in her house.
I think she was thinking about telling them that they can go inside the house and let them eat the cake and then when they get fatter than they
ReplyDeletewill go in a sper house then the woman will sai that they are going to get bernd in fier then she will it them and they will be terrified then the stepmother will be looking for them and she will be looking for them and they will not be there because she left them in the forest they might not see them again and she will never see them again in there life the dad should be terrified becuase you left them
I think she is going to let the kids eat how mouch they want and they can live in her house for ever but then after she is going to eat the children up the children will be eaten because the old woman will eat them and they will never be alive and the old woman will finely get rid of the kids and the mom will be very Happy that her children was finely rid for ever and the mom doesn't have to be inoyd
ReplyDeleteCome in you can eat as much as you won't you really need a really really need a very cunphe bed you children are really cold so you can stay
ReplyDeleteWot ar thes children do in her and they eating my house and they ar eating my window come in and get cumfe in my bed.and I will make you soop for you.
ReplyDeleteShe would think these children would be in my pot today with there meat turning into a Chicken leg hopping around like a bunch of rabbits they must be got rid of now before I cook them on my pot or make them be my slave
ReplyDeleteSounds like the kind of thoughts a witch might have Tremayne.
DeleteHello little children come in side and you will be very safe and warm eat as much as you like how left you alone and scared of the animals don't worry I will brteckt you
ReplyDeleteyou will be safe
Hurry up you little silly old children so I can eat you for my super. Eat as much as you want to and get fat and yumy.
ReplyDeleteYou poor children come in side do you need some blankets becaues I have blankets and you who would leave poor children in the forests eat when your hungry becaues l don't care because l can find another ginger bread house
ReplyDeleteI think the old lady would thinking what if I eat the children so if she was wicked she would be thinking eat up little children in till your nice and full so I could have more meat when I eat you up for my tummy. Or if she was a kind lady she would say come inside children it's freezing cold out here who would leave some nice here you poor children you can eat as much as you like.
ReplyDeleteeat as much as can because your starving and you had no food did you eat any food at home but if you didn't that's okay so you can eat everything I don't care if you finish my house.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds very generous Ryan. Does she have a plan?
DeleteNo she is just very kind.
DeleteHay. Why have eton a peas of my house.coming chidron how left you here on your om. Come on hure up I won't to eat you up for tea so so eat up I won't my tea now so
ReplyDeleteI see little children nibbling my gingerbread house now lets tell them to come come in my gingerbread house and let them eat but not now when they get closer.right lets tel them now come come in my gingerbread house and have some tea and food.wahaha you are trapped now you will never get out. Now tell me where are you going to now.If you don't tell me I will eat you for dinner and breakfast unless you tell me where you are going right now in this minute and then I will let you leave tomorrow but tomorrow morning you have to eat my gingerbread food as soon as I give you ok ok?
ReplyDeleteCome in who leave you in the forest you will eat how many you won't you are looking so cold here you will be warme and lonely don't worry here will be safe and you will be very happy
ReplyDeleteI think she will think that ''Why are these children eating my own house''. This is my house
ReplyDeleteIf the old lady is kind she would say eat as much as you want but try not to eat all of the house because it's going to disappear. And if the old lady was a wicked she would say come on and eat some more food so I could eat all of them and then you will die he he he.
ReplyDeleteIf she was kind she will say yes eat and when you are full don't eat more and come in and I got to many place for you to sleep this night wait not this night every night like today or tomorrow I don't care if you want to and watch movies with me and my friends wait I don't have friends but you two can be my best friends because now I know you I just want to say who left you in this forest all alone you must be so hungry because I just saw you eating my roof and my windows and everything in my house.Nobody came here before to meet me.
ReplyDeleteGood idea Samuel. She may be a kind, but lonely old woman who is happy to see and feed these children.
DeleteI think she is thinking look at these wonderful children eat as much as u can so when you get fat i will eat you. It will be like eating the Fates pig in the world or she might be thinking. Well look at these starving little children eating my food eat as much as you can when you get full up tell me and you can come inside and have juice or hot chocolate which one do you prefer and i got 2 warm beds set up for you and you do know you are the first ones to visit me how nice of you.
ReplyDeletewhy did you ubandon us you evl lookin wich
ReplyDeletearfter you fubidn us
its time to fubidon you wikid
nortee meen rubish wooman
that kils kids that as niser than you
and liks to et youup
who are these children what the eating my roof now it is going to rain and ICE with rain oh my god you are killing my life just stop eating my HOUSE I NEED to fresh my self down why are you eating my house
ReplyDeleteWhat are the's children doing they are eating my house why are they eating it it's for me i will make hansel fat for me to eat the children look hungry and tired they need to have food and sleep i will make a bed for them to have a rest who put this children into the woods i need to teach them a lesson not to eat my house how dare them eat my house i will punish them for eating my house
ReplyDeletedo you wont some of my sweets or do you wont to get ckooct into the uvon and become as my tasty soop anser me now i ges that was a no then get some of my candy and sweets to eat do you whant to go into my bedroom then you geys could sleep in my bed.
ReplyDeleteshe might be thinking the children is eating my food whith there ugly hands how rood but they can still eat it and they can come in then i will put them in my pot so they can die for ever so they cant see there bad there thery nise to me and my gingerbread house how wonderful i will be evil for ever they cant eat it all its mean.
ReplyDeleteI think he's evil because she's a which.I think she's thinking of making them do lots of jobs for her and then she want's to make them die in the forest again and when they died she wants to cook the dead bodies.If she was a kind woman she will make Hansel and Gretel eat the hole house.
ReplyDeleteWhere would she live if they ate the whole house Oliver?
DeleteLook at these little children I will eat you owl up I can eat you for lunch diner and in the forest or put them in the pot and kook them then see if dad and mum come and save you never ever I will kill you now if you stop eating and stab you.
ReplyDeleteOh look at the poor children eating my house they must be starving i don`t know how they managed to get into the forest.Oh dear little children would you like to go inside because you look so freezing and hungry you can eat what you want but not to much because i do not want you to get fat and i don`t think you want to get fat anyway do not desturb me your bed time is at 8.30 and do not eat to much eat something healthy good night.
ReplyDeleteWhy are these children eating my house do they even have a house?I hope they do have a house because i don't want to bring them into my house.But if I bring them into my house I could cook them together achaly I could use one as a slave and I could eat the other one.
ReplyDeleteif she was kind she would say come in litle children have a drink you must be hungry who left you in the forest all by your self you are just litle children you can,t be left alown but you will be safe and sound with me in my cotedj jinjir bread house
ReplyDeleteWhy are these children eating my house do they even have a house?I hope they do have a house because i don't want to bring them into my house.But if I bring them into my house I could cook them together achaly I could use one as a slave and I could eat the other one.
ReplyDeleteOh look some children eting my house I think we can cook them for my diner and if we have a noth for tmurl we can have them for life. Just maybe only the bons of the children. I am so excited to be eating some more little people from the forest wondering around my house.but am so lucky that I can eat as much as I like because I have lost of my speshel food.
ReplyDeleteThe old woman is probably thinking 'Who are these children?what?is my house tasty?if so, i will persuade them to come and eat some more sweets and make one my pet! He,He,Ha'
ReplyDeleteWho is eating down my house let me go and check?children luckily i have planed out what to do with children when they come my plan is to lock up the bigger one in a cage and the other one i will make her be my slave and she will cook food for him to fatten him up then i will put him in a pot and then she will cook him so i can eat him. exuse me can we come in we are really freezing and we are really hungry. of corse you can come in ive got plenty of food.
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