By now Year 5 are very familiar with the story of Peter Pan, but imagine if we could rewrite the way the story ends.
Now write your own alternative ending to the story.
Be creative, but remember to stay true to the spirit of the book and write in an appropriate style.
Be creative, but remember to stay true to the spirit of the book and write in an appropriate style.
the story could have ended by when wendy john and ichael stay in neverland and never go back to london and peter get adopted by wendy mother and father but nana would live in neverland because if they see that peter is living with wendy mother and father he is going to miss wendy and i also think that the story should have ended by when peter captures captain hook and the pirates insted of when captain hook captures wendy and the lost boys the reson i think that peter should have captured captain hook and his pirates is because captain hook is mean and he is always defeating peter and wendy and the lost boys so for a chance peter should capture captain hook and his peskey pirates
ReplyDeletethe story could have ended like this...
ReplyDeleteAfter a warming meal Wendy began to have fun,little did she know Tinker bell was very found of Wendy even if she didn't act like it.So she didn't want her to leave so she removed all her memories of home.The next morning Peter taught Wendy how to steal birds eggs for breakfast. Of course Peter didn't know about the magic
To be continued...
It have ended with Wendy saying that she is going to stay in Neverland, but if she did she would have left her parents so depressed.
ReplyDeletePeter flew Wendy home in the pirate ship but once they arrived in London Wendy suddenly wanted to go back to Neverland. Wendy told her parents that she went to Neverland but they just thought she was dreaming. Wendy,John and Michael promised Peter that they would visit him and the Lost Boys at Neverland again soon.
ReplyDeleteAs they was flying home they crashed into a plane tumbling onto a different house which was the walkers who did not really like the darlings because when they were younger Mr darling burnt his favourite book ever since that day they have never talked. Down the children went tinker belle did not notice that the children were gone missing. As fast as tinker bell could fly she went to go and tell Peter the terrible news . Meanwhile the children were trying to hide from Mr walkers kids but it was very difficult because one was walking and one was crawling. They had to go under rugs hide behind thing in tell they found a way out they tried to think of happy thoughts to get them up in the air but it didn't work. As they where going they got caught by the whole walker family and was locked in a jail in there house. And stayed there for 2 to 3 days. Meanwhile tinker belle found the house and let free and flew of to the darling house.
ReplyDeleteThey lived happily ever
Peter slowly creeped up to hook and pushed him of the edge he fell right into the sea bed and the crocodile called for more crocodiles and they all came and they all started fighting over him and he had minutes to swim until he climbed onto the ship and Peter Pan was waiting for him SLASH! hook's head was cut straight of and his body fell straight into the ocean and everything was fed to the crocodiles.....Days later wendy took the lost boys to london and asked her parents if they could be adopted.....''No! isn't it hard enough to look after you little things!'' shouted the father of the darlings....And they got stuck in london for the rest of there lives...and peter stayed a boy forever and ever.....
ReplyDeletePeter rushed towards the pirate ship to save his friends.This time,Peter actually cared about Wendy than his other girls.When he arrived at the scene,dozens of pirates were at the table ready to eat.Peter had to think of a way to get them distracted,so he sacrificed himself for his friends.When the Pirates find out that peter was here,he swung himself to the top of the deck where could set free the Lost boys and sadly get eaten.As the were set free they flew up in the air while Peter demanded them to go.Feeling heartbroken,Wendy looked back to see the Pirates crowding Peter with their knives.After Wendy had saw what had happened she trained the Lost boys to be just as cruel as the Pirates.After months of training they finally defeated Captain Hook and ate them for dinner.
ReplyDeleteAt the crack of dawn Peter and Wendy came up with a plan a plan to trick Captain Hook that they have turned on the Lost Boys and want to be on his crew but the lost boys could not find out and have to believe they have betrayed them because it would be to risky it was an incredible plan But One wrong move can get us in so much danger.The next day peter and wendy left the house early in the morning. to be truthful they were scared and didnt know if they were going to make it to be continue
ReplyDeleteMaybe a twist to Peter Pan could be that the pirates could defeat Peter and Captain Hook can be the ruler of neverland. Another twist could be that peter could not like girls and the lost boys could become lost girls
ReplyDeleteGreat ideas Malachi. Now write the alternative ending!
DeletePeter rushed towards the lagoon and there the lost boys were captured by hook.But hook knew that he was coming back to save them so he was guarding.So peter imitated an alligator and hook fainted with a big bang on the floor and cut the rope holding the lost boys and then they were set free!Peter got a bucked of water and splashed it on hooks face as he wanted to escape."I'm going to get you!"hook shouted hook.As he didn't want anymore trouble,peter threw hook into the sea and he was never found again...
Deletemaybe when Wendy starts to feel homesick and wants to go home, she asks Peter Pan if he wants to go with him but in my verson Peter Pan says yes to go back to London with Wendy,John,Michael and they all get adopted.
ReplyDeleteOn there way back to London Captain Hook tracked Peter Pan down and they had a fight and Captain Hook wins.
It might be like this at the end when he's looking out the window he sees a cloud that give you bad luck. When u look at the cloud the cloud will curse you but peater pan didn't know. So when he went and flew off everything went really wrong, He was flying calmly but then arrow cept on shooting him but they missed , he lost his shaddow and fell (CRASH!) he got up and walked home. When he got home he saw tinker bell he said" Hi Tinker Bell!" She didn't answer. She stuck her tounge at him pushed him and flew away. Peater pan ran to his bed and cried of sadness.he was wondering why does people hate me soo much! Than he rood to a new place.
ReplyDeletePeter lunged the sword at hook, hook stopped him with his hook then it became a dead end for captain, "it's time I told the truth " he said pushing the sword."I've hid this for a very long time,Peter boy I am your father." Peter was shocked! "How could you be my father?" He replied as he put the sword in his belt. Hook stood up and took a picture out of his pocket he gave it to Peter and Peter saw that there was a man holding a baby "that's you and that's me we took this when you was very young,Iost you long ago then I saw you with the lost boys and I thought you will be happier so I never told you I am sorry please for give me Peter son."
ReplyDeleteA different ending for peter pan could be that the mermaids come with an army of mermaids and surround the whole island so when peter tries to defeat captain Hook and the mermaids will destroy the whole boat and sink both Peter and Hook ecxept Tinkerbell to make them fly and they could wrestle Tick Tock and take him down to and make him their pet then rebuild the boat
ReplyDeleteI think that if the ending could be a little dark for me...
ReplyDeleteCaptain Hook jumped of the boat and dragged Peter with him the both fell into the water "you old maggot was this your plan all along"Asked Peter ,flying out of the water with Captain Hook holding on to his shirt
"I've got you now Peter you will die with me or SNIEY COME SAVE ME!"
Sniey didn't know that Captain Hook called and was trying to capture Wendy and the lost boys *tick tock noise* the Crocidle is coming closer to the boat
"Let go you old cod fish I can't save you"Said Peter sadly
"Agh Help please I'm sorry for trying to poison you and for trying to kill you please I don't want to di
After a heroic day Peter Pan was preparing for the most serious fight of his life. The time had come, two men were standing face to face with swords pointing towards the corner of eachoethers eyes. Something unexpected happened, Pan lowered his sword and held his and out
ReplyDelete"Fine you take over my side and will go to London but we can be friends,".
Peter sailed to London and was adopted,from that day onwards everyone lived happily.
Alternate Ending For Peter Pan
ReplyDeleteCaptain Hook had a secret...... It was that had hallucinating gas and he threw it at Peter Pan to make it look like everybody except Wendy was Wendy! Wendy was portrayed as Captain Hook
Peter was going to push Captain Hook. 1..2..3.. But he couldn't. There was an urge to let Captain go. Peter had to choose between Wendy or Adventure. Tinkerbell was worried. She couldn't do anything but magically push Hook in. Peter had chosen... Adventure. He let Hook go only to realize his face. It looked so relieved, so sorrowful. Hook lifted his head up and saw Peter. He tried to get back into the game, but couldn't. Tink knew what was wrong. Hook... was sorry! Then Tink whispered that... To Be Continued.
ReplyDeletethat he had got to Hook's soft side! He went for the hit and then Wham! Bam! Hook was down. The shipmates couldn't do anything, and Smee was glad Hook was gone. All of the time Captain had dragged him along as a sidekick! This was his ticket to freedom! But with Hook, it was also his ticket to family. See, Smee had left his wife and kids behind for the job that would pay him most. He was planning to steal some of the treasure they find. But he couldn't sail the ship! he needed to call on someone Hook would never approve of. Not Peter, but Blackbeard. He was the undefeated pirate...
DeleteThe story could have ended like this one night stood Peter Pan packing up his clothes meanwhile Wendy wants to stay in never land were she won't grow up she begged for Peter Pan to stay but he didn't listen he flew back to London were he could grow up.one day he found a job were he was a servant the magnificent lady madam muezell Karelian cried you are a lazy boy you don't know how to wash my hair make food you are useless .peter pan grew older he got married and had children he forgot Captain Hook won the battle against the terrorist Peter Pan what Captain Hook called Peter
ReplyDeleteThe adventure continues. When Peter finally had the chance to defeat Captain Hook , Peter fell down to the ground Peter came face to face with Captain Hooks brother but at the end of the day Peter got blasted of never land forever Captain Hook finally won and took over neverland but just as he was about to relax Peter showed up "did you though you can defeat me " said Peter to be contine
ReplyDeleteI wish the story ended which Peter getting defeated by Hook then Wendy John Michael and the lost boys go to earth then Peter gets tourtured by Hook but Wendy and the lost boys sneak out to rescue Peter.
ReplyDeleteWendy and Peter get married and adopt the lost boys they have a big full house until Wendy and Peter had there own real child every day was a knew day for them
ReplyDeleteI wish that Peter defeated hook and came to London with Wendy and the the lost boys
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